Opinion Essay: Zoos

List 3 things you'd change about your school. Just list, no explanation.

🗻 Weak claim: "Phones are bad sometimes." Strong claim: "Phones cost students 23 minutes of focus per hour."

1. 1ClaimState your opinion clearly in the introduction.
2. 2ReasonsGive at least two supporting reasons with details.
3. 3OrganizationUse an introduction, body, and conclusion.
4. 4TransitionsUse linking words like because, for example, also.

Aim for at least 100 words (up to 400).

1. 5ConventionsCheck spelling, punctuation, and grammar.

Aim for at least 100 words (up to 400).