Paragraph Revision: A person you admire

✍️ Today's hook

Write a paragraph about this topic, then revise it to add better word choices and transitions: Write a paragraph about a person you admire.

🔥 Warm-up scribble

Take a 4-word sentence and add an adjective.

🪶 Mentor sentence

🧱 "The dog ran." → "The muddy dog ran into the kitchen."

What to do

Write a paragraph about this topic, then revise it to add better word choices and transitions: Write a paragraph about a person you admire.

Write a paragraph about this topic, then revise it to add better word choices and transitions: Write a paragraph about a person you admire.

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