Editing: Wordiness (Challenge)

✍️ Today's hook

Make concise: Due to the fact that it was raining, we stayed.

🔥 Warm-up scribble

Write the shortest sentence you can think of. Now make it longer with one word.

🪶 Mentor sentence

🧱 "The dog ran." → "The muddy dog ran into the kitchen."

What to do

Make concise: Due to the fact that it was raining, we stayed. Can you find three more examples in a book or article?

Make concise: Due to the fact that it was raining, we stayed. Can you find three more examples in a book or article?

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