Literary Analysis: Conflict

List 3 things you'd change about your school. Just list, no explanation.

🗻 Weak claim: "Phones are bad sometimes." Strong claim: "Phones cost students 23 minutes of focus per hour."

1. 1ThesisPresent a clear analytical thesis.
2. 2EvidenceUse textual evidence with citations.
3. 3AnalysisExplain what the evidence means.
4. 4OrganizationOrganize by idea, not by source.
5. 5StyleUse formal academic tone throughout.

Aim for at least 200 words (up to 600).