Literary Analysis: Point of View

List 3 things you'd change about your school. Just list, no explanation.

🗻 Strong claim: "Phones do not belong in classrooms — and here's the data to prove it."

1. 1ThesisPresent a clear analytical thesis.
2. 2EvidenceUse textual evidence with citations.
3. 3AnalysisExplain what the evidence means.
4. 4OrganizationOrganize by idea, not by source.
5. 5StyleUse formal academic tone throughout.

Aim for at least 200 words (up to 600).