Lesson 45 of 88 · Cause and Effect
⭐ 30 XP🧱 Sentence WorkshopCause & Effect: Redundancy
✍️ Today's hook
Remove the redundancy: She returned back to the store.
Warm-up scribble
Take a 4-word sentence and add an adjective.
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🧱 "It was raining." → "Rain hammered the windows like an angry visitor."
Instructions
Remove the redundancy: She returned back to the store.
Creative Writing
Remove the redundancy: She returned back to the store.
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Cause & Effect: Redundancy
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