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Lesson 85 of 88 ยท Cause and Effect

โญ 30 XP๐Ÿงฑ Sentence Workshop

Cause & Effect: Wordiness

โœ๏ธQuill Brief #85

Make concise: Due to the fact that it was raining, we stayed.

๐ŸŽฏ Your mission

Make every word earn its spot.

โšก The twist

Read it out loud. Your ear catches what your eye misses.

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Warm-up scribble

Write a sentence about your hand without using the word 'hand'.

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Mentor sentence

๐Ÿงฑ "It was raining." โ†’ "Rain hammered the windows like an angry visitor."

Instructions

Make concise: Due to the fact that it was raining, we stayed.

Creative Writing

Make concise: Due to the fact that it was raining, we stayed.

Writing Prompt:

Make concise: Due to the fact that it was raining, we stayed.

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Why this matters in real life

Every text, every email, every note โ€” it's all sentences. Better sentences = clearer life.

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Stretch Challenge

Try this in real life this week.

Find a sentence in a book that you wish you'd written. Copy it down.

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For the dinner table

โ€œRead me your best sentence. Why is it good?โ€

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