Today is rung 11 of 12 on this topic
Writing about one small moment
Can do: Writes three to five sentences about a single event, in order, with a beginning and an end.
Why it matters
Small and specific beats big and vague at every age. Learning to zoom in on one moment is the core move of all narrative writing.
What it looks like when it's wobbly
"I went to the park it was fun" — a whole day compressed to one flat line, or a list of everything that happened since breakfast.
⏱️ Two-minute check
"Write about one thing that happened today — just one small bit of it."
Solid looks like: Three sentences, all about the same moment, in the order it happened.
The full activity for this topic · 15 minutes
Zoom In
- 1They tell you about their day out loud. Pick the most interesting ten seconds of it.
- 2"That bit. Just that bit. Tell me it again, slowly."
- 3Sketch three boxes: first, next, last. They draw a quick picture in each.
- 4Write one or two sentences under each box.
- 5Read it back and ask for one detail you can see, hear or smell to be added somewhere.
If it's too hard
They dictate and you scribe, then they copy one sentence of it themselves.
If it's too easy
Add how they felt, and end with a sentence that isn't "it was fun".
Say this
"Don't tell me the whole day — tell me the best ten seconds of it."