Day 139 of 180Week 28 of 36, ThursdayFourth quarter

Rewrite the weakest paragraph

โœ๏ธ Writing๐Ÿ” Practiseโฑ๏ธ about 45 minutes

Identify and rewrite the weakest paragraph in an old essay.

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Today is rung 10 of 12 on this topic

The high-school literary essay

Can do: Writes an essay with an arguable thesis, integrated quotations and analysis that answers the question.

Why it matters

It's the assessed form of Grade 9 English. Most lost marks come from answering a slightly different question than the one set.

What it looks like when it's wobbly

Writes everything they know about the book instead of answering the specific question asked.

โฑ๏ธ Two-minute check

Read their thesis alongside the question. "Does this answer that?"

Solid looks like: The thesis contains the question's terms and takes a position.

The full activity for this topic ยท 30 minutes

Answer the Question in One Sentence

The essay questionThe textPaper
  1. 1Underline the command word and the key terms in the question.
  2. 2Write a one-sentence answer using those exact terms. That's the thesis.
  3. 3Plan three paragraphs, each a reason the thesis is true, with quotes chosen in advance.
  4. 4Draft, then check every paragraph's first sentence links back to the question.
  5. 5Mark it against the rubric yourself before submitting โ€” most rubrics are published.

If it's too hard

Thesis plus one fully developed paragraph.

If it's too easy

Include a paragraph handling evidence that complicates the thesis.

Say this

"Read the question again. Now read your thesis. Are they about the same thing?"

Writing practice

Week 28 at a glance

  1. Monday ยท Day 136

    ๐Ÿ”ข Math

    Quadratics, all methods

  2. Tuesday ยท Day 137

    ๐Ÿ“– Reading

    Vocabulary from reading

  3. Wednesday ยท Day 138

    ๐Ÿ”ข Math

    Function for a real cost

  4. Thursday ยท Day 139

    โœ๏ธ Writing

    Rewrite the weakest paragraph

  5. Friday ยท Day 140

    ๐Ÿงญ Study & Life Skills

    Half-year grade audit

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